July 09, 2005

Sweet One's 25 Word Challenge

This week Feisty Repartee is hosting the 25 Word Challenge; however, my lovely and bright twelve and a half-year-old Sweet One is hosting.

So, please remember to keep it PG-13.

The rules are very simple:

a) each comment has to be precisely 25 words and
b) no back to back comments, but commenters can come back as often as they like.

Here goes:

As she opened her umbrella and stepped off the bus and into the wet, Seattle street, she remembered her original intentions for this long trip,

Next week my buddy David over at Fishtown Chatter is hosting.

The rest of the schedule includes:

July 23 – Lippy Cat of Wired JAFA
July 30 - Mark of WitNit
August 6 - the Lovely Kate of KateSpot
August 13 - Tincanman at Tincanman
August 20 - Amelie of for a breath i tarry
August 27 - VW of One Happy Dog Speaks

Sekreet Message to That 1 Guy: Happy Birthday!!

UPDATE!

Looks like I am having a comment problem. Please keep trying or email me your comment contributions. Thank you!

Comments are still down, it a munuviana thing. My apologies.

Zonker has the first comment to continue the story:

It had taken her a long time to get to this point and so much had changed in that time, including her. Moving north, she...


My new NOLA friend, Karen (see you in a couple of weeks) added:

…looked for him. He said he would be waiting, and sure enough, there he was. Her heart sank as she looked into his weatherbeaten face.

Next week's host and my buddy David chimes in:

sliced through the drizzle, making a beeline toward her destination-the home of a man whom she had once loved, a man who had once...

UPDATE TWO:

My new hero is the dashing gentleman of Light & Dark. Comments are back up! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Posted by Christina at July 9, 2005 06:03 AM

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...been everything to her. As physicists, their relationship had begun as professionals, but a love affair had quickly bloomed between them. Now, ten years on...

Posted by: Lippy at July 9, 2005 10:05 PM

an awkward silence quickly grew between them. She hesitantly glanced in his direction only to find him staring straight at her, with a questioning look.....

Posted by: Sweet One at July 9, 2005 10:26 PM

their careers having taken them to opposite coasts, they were strangers once again. She had married a man she did not really love, just to ......

Posted by: David Spence at July 9, 2005 10:28 PM

...please her father, whose greatest desire (or so he frequently said) had been to see his eldest daughter married to anyone but a physicist.. Anyone...

Posted by: Elisson at July 9, 2005 11:57 PM

...but someone who sees nothing beyond the exactness of white or black. So many shades of gray he had failed to see. He had missed..

Posted by: Lolly at July 10, 2005 11:15 AM

out on life, and that was an experience he could never replace. there were no fond memories of times gone by, no old familiar faces...

Posted by: amelie at July 10, 2005 01:30 PM

barely recognizing the woman who had been his true love. His love for her hadn't died, it just got hurt and buried deep inside.

Posted by: David Spence at July 10, 2005 03:01 PM

But now that she had run away from her husband they would finally be together again. They would try one more time, for their love.......

Posted by: Sweet One at July 10, 2005 03:15 PM

would be the last chance for salvation for each of them. She was mired in a depression so paralyzing that the Seattle rain seemed rejuvenative.

Posted by: David Spence at July 10, 2005 03:43 PM

He watched her fold up her umbrella and tilt her head up, toward the sky to receive the cool, refreshing rain on her smooth face.

Posted by: Sweet One at July 10, 2005 06:40 PM

Her face glistened-the rain made it shimmer and each translucent droplet magnified her beauty in his eyes. He reached for her pale, damp hand....

Posted by: David Spence at July 10, 2005 06:52 PM

She smiled and grasped it tightly, she was so relieved that they were there together. But soon, her husband would start looking for her again.

Posted by: Sweet One at July 10, 2005 07:01 PM

Seattle would not be a place he would look-he knew of her love for the Louisiana bayou and the Hill Country of East Texas.

Posted by: David Spence at July 10, 2005 07:21 PM

Still, he knew she was uneasy about the fact that her father was on his death-bed, and she was dissapointing him greatly. But now she,

Posted by: Sweet One at July 10, 2005 08:04 PM

had been drawn westward by a stronger force, like the moon pulls at the tides. Like her father, she too was dying, not from a .....

Posted by: David Spence at July 10, 2005 10:32 PM

weak heart, but from a cancer growing deep within her.

A late discovery, it had already invaded a number of organs. She had declined treatment.

Posted by: Christina at July 10, 2005 11:44 PM

She was here to tell her love that she'd be leaving soon. Time was a precious and she wanted to spend the last with him.

Posted by: Oddybobo at July 11, 2005 07:45 AM

Hours went by before she uttered a single word, "Goodbye." He was shaken, and asked what she meant, but he was never to be answered.

Posted by: Sweet One at July 11, 2005 09:05 AM

THE END!

Brilliant job everyone.

Special kudos to Sweet One: Bravo, Sweetie, I'm very proud of you!

Posted by: Christina at July 11, 2005 09:07 AM

That Sweet One is as amazing as her mama!

Posted by: livey at July 11, 2005 12:03 PM

Sweet One's alias should be Smart One! Great Job!

Posted by: David Spence at July 11, 2005 12:34 PM

All I can do is try to live up to my mama, The Feistiness Herself! (Bugles Sound!)

Thanks Everybody, this is a lot of fun!

Posted by: Sweet One at July 11, 2005 12:57 PM

Bugles?

BUGLES??

What happened to the trumpets??

Geez.

; )

Great Job, Sweetie! (or should that be Smartie?)

Posted by: Christina at July 11, 2005 01:00 PM

Well, ya know, nothing else popped into my head when I thought, "Mentioning Royal Names," Whatever, you get the picture.
Right?

Posted by: Sweet One at July 11, 2005 01:07 PM

Who says mothers and daughters do not communicate?

This is too funny.

Daughter is in the other room on another computer. Each time she posts a comment, she has to walk over to me and tell me about a comment she has just posted.

Interesting.

Who knew?

Posted by: Christina at July 11, 2005 01:11 PM

Excellent job Sweet One!! It was a lot of fun to read!

Posted by: Jenn at July 11, 2005 05:03 PM

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